miércoles, 4 de noviembre de 2015

A major event in a famous person's career


Robin Williams was born on July 21,1951, in Chicago,U.S.A. He was a very famous actor, hehad had an exciting carrer until he got sick He had performed in many movies,but his health went down. He got very sick.A severe depression attacked him. He had suffered that depression that depression for few years, but it was enough to finish with his life.

He was found dead in his California home.It was a tragic event,his family had talked with him in some cases, but he had not liked to talked with them. He had stayed at home for many days before his family found him dead. He was diagnosed with parkinson´s desease which he had not revealed  publicy. Also the actor was battling depression and anxiety, but at the age of 63 he dead.

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